Farida Begum, travelling from Khilgaon to Bangshal on foot, fainted of exhaustion.

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Farida Begum, travelling from Khilgaon to Bangshal on foot, fainted of exhaustion. Hearing that she might be able to procure relief food items from the area, she had made her journey. She did get some half a kilo rice but ended up losing her consciousness due to the heat and worries about the lack of food for her family.
 
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Farida Begum, travelling from Khilgaon to Bangshal on foot, fainted of exhaustion. [STRIKE]Hearing[/STRIKE] Having heard that she might be able to procure relief food items from the area, she had made [strike]her[/strike] the journey. She did get [STRIKE]some[/STRIKE] [about] half a kilo rice but ended up losing [STRIKE]her[/STRIKE] consciousness due to the heat and [STRIKE]worries[/STRIKE] concerns about the lack of food for her family.

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