alpacinou
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John walked towards the Mississippi, feeling the soft soil swallowing his steps. As he got closer, he felt the acrid smell of sewage wafting from the surface of the water fill his nose. The river along with all the filth they'd dump into it flowed soundlessly in the humid night. He jumped in the water, his hands motionless, plunging deeper and deeper into the abyss.
John walked towards the Mississippi, feeling the soft soil swallowing his steps. As he got closer, he felt the acrid smell of sewage wafting from the surface of the water fill his nose. The river along with all the filth they'd dump into it flowed soundlessly in the humid night. He jumped in the water, his hands motionless, plunging deeper and deeper into the abyss.