A Malaysian Movie, Abang Long Fadil

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Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

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In this sequel, Fadil falls into the mafia world, mastered by Taji Samprit and his son Wak Doyok. A certain incident leads Fadil to be mistaken as mercenary killer known as Tiger by the Police. Now, the only way Fadil can clear his name is if he reveals Tiger`s true identity.

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Fadil who is mistaken as Tiger, a professional assassin has to lead life as one to prove his innocence. He also attempts to reveal Tiger's true identity.
 

Tarheel

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long Summary
In this sequel, Fadil falls into the mafia world, mastered by Taji Samprit and his son Wak Doyok. A certain incident leads Fadil to be mistaken as a mercenary killer known as Tiger by the police. Now, the only way Fadil can clear his name is if he reveals Tiger`s true identity.

Short Summary
Fadil who is mistaken for Tiger, a professional assassin has to lead a life as a professional assassin to prove his innocence. He also attempts to reveal Tiger's true identity.

I would say "uncovers" instead of "reveals" and "uncover" instead of "reveal".
 
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