A Malaysian Movie, You Mean the World to Me.

Gaya87

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary
Sunny is a filmmaker who has fallen unto hard times. He returns to his hometown of Penang to make a movie about his dysfunctional family, a story marked by one particularly traumatizing event he witnessed as a child. That event caused him to bear resentment towards his family, especially his sister, his mentally challenged elder brother and his mother. As he struggles with financial problems as well as his own guilt while making the film, Sunny learns the true value of family.

Shorty summary
Sunny, a filmmaker who returns to his hometown, Penang to shoot a film about his family. Facing financial challenges, Sunny is confronted by the truth of his family and learns to accept the past.
 

emsr2d2

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Hi, can you please check the following sentences? Thank you.

Long summary

Sunny is a filmmaker who has fallen [STRIKE]unto[/STRIKE] on hard times. He returns to his hometown of Penang to make a movie about his dysfunctional family, a story marked by one particularly traumatizing event he witnessed as a child. That event caused him to bear resentment towards his family, especially his sister, his mentally-challenged elder brother and his mother. As he struggles with financial problems as well as his own guilt while making the film, Sunny learns the true value of family.


[STRIKE]Shorty[/STRIKE] Short summary

Sunny, a filmmaker, [STRIKE]who[/STRIKE] returns to his hometown, Penang, to shoot a film about his family. Facing financial challenges, Sunny is confronted by/with the truth [STRIKE]of[/STRIKE] about his family and learns to accept the past.

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