[Grammar] After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Mark

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Mark, 42 years old, thin, tall, and brown eyes, sitting in a table, facing the window, waiting for her."


Thanks.

 

[teechar]

After she entered to the coffee shop, she recognized Mark— 42 years old, thin, tall, and brown eyes, sitting [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] at a table, facing the window, waiting for her."

Thanks.

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[emsr2d2]

We don't say "entered to". It should be "After she entered the coffee shop" at the start.

 

[teechar]

We don't say "entered to".

Indeed we don't. I missed that one. :up: