[General] both for which - which for both?

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JuBrunello

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I am having some serious trouble phrasing this sentence...

"I wish expand my analytical skills and the ability to think strategically – both for which this program at ABC University is well-known"

Can anyone please help me? I am in a loop here, trying to fit both, which and for in different positions, but none really work :-?

cheers
 
I am having some serious trouble phrasing this sentence.

"I wish to expand my analytical skills and [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] my ability to think strategically – [STRIKE]both for which[/STRIKE] for both of which this program at ABC University is well-known."

Can anyone please help me? I am in a loop here, trying to fit both, which and for in different positions, but none really work :-?

Cheers.


It's a bit clunky even with the correction. I would be inclined to split this into two sentences.

I want to expand my analytical skills and my ability to think strategically. The program at ABC University is well-known for facilitating both.
 
Thanks a lot, the split sentence sounds really much better :-D
 
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