correction

[vasekjez93]

Hi,
I write quite important thesis for school, I would like to ask for correction to the headline ​"Rehabilitation of Patients after Complications with Total Joint Replacement of the Lower Limbs" , other version could be "Rehabilitation of Patients after Total Joint Replacement Complications of the Lower Limbs" should there be - OF THE lower limbs or ON (the) lower extremity (want to write mainly about hip and knee, complications as infection or dislocations) or could I use "Rehabilitation of Patients with Complications after Lower Extremities Total Joint Replacements" ? (I am not native english speeker) Thank you, Vaclav Jezek

 

[tedmc]

"Rehabilitation of Patients with Complications after Total Joint Replacements of the Lower Limbs" sounds clearer to me.

Please note the following:
- You should use period/full-stop instead of commas to separate sentences. You have written the whole paragraph in one sentence and put everything, in one paragraph.
- The above is a title, not a headline.
- "English" is spelt with a capital letter.
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[KarenHeinz]

How about this title "Rehabilitation of Patients with Total Joint Replacement of the Lower Limbs"

Not a teacher