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- Aug 22, 2008
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- Iran
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- Iran
Hello,
What a recent new story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons and examples to support your response.
There are two reasons that I have recently affected by the demonstrations in both developed and Arab countries in the world.
The first reason I would like to mention is that the developed countries are rich but the people are still dissatisfied with unjustified decisions made by the governments. These countries, for instance, cannot provide more facilities, jobs, health care for their people win the economical crisis any longer.
Another reason is the demonstrations among people of Arab countries who are not either content with their government and they try to get their right. Arab nations, For example, try to reach democracy. They protest against their governments and chaos has made in their cities.
CONCLUSION:
Would you please help me out how to conclude the essay?
Thanks in advance.
What a recent new story has affected you the most? In what ways has it affected you? Use reasons and examples to support your response.
There are two reasons that I have recently affected by the demonstrations in both developed and Arab countries in the world.
The first reason I would like to mention is that the developed countries are rich but the people are still dissatisfied with unjustified decisions made by the governments. These countries, for instance, cannot provide more facilities, jobs, health care for their people win the economical crisis any longer.
Another reason is the demonstrations among people of Arab countries who are not either content with their government and they try to get their right. Arab nations, For example, try to reach democracy. They protest against their governments and chaos has made in their cities.
CONCLUSION:
Would you please help me out how to conclude the essay?
Thanks in advance.