[Vocabulary] Course information request

Riska mohamed

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Hi, I need to write an email to an institute asking them to guide me with some courses which I require to do a nursing degree in Australia.I wrote this but I don't know if I should make some corrections on this . I'd really appreciate any help with this .here is my email:

To whom it may concern,
Course information request
This is to request for a diploma in nursing and a certificate in age care which will grant me some credit points to skip my first year of nursing degree in Australia.
I would be much obliged if you can provide me with the best courses and guide me through this.I am anxious to apply for it in your renowned institution for admission.
Thank you for your attention to my request. I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely,
Riska Mohammed.
 
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Tarheel

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If you must say it say:

I look forward to receiving your response.
 

Tarheel

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Perhaps:

I am looking to earn a diploma in nursing (bachelor's degree)....

And:

I would much obliged if you would help me choose the best courses for me.
 
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