dart one's head in direction

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A deer is grazing at the edge of the clearing. It suddenly darts its head in direction of the house. A moment later, the front door opens and Jeff comes out.

I wrote this. Is 'darts' appropriate here? And is the sentence okay in this context?
 

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It seems OK to me.
 

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You need "the" before "direction".
 
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Oops. I missed that.
 
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