Diary - Last night, I had a class with my online teacher

[Maybo]

This is an entry from my diary. Please check it and correct any mistakes.

Last night, I had a class with my online teacher and she told me that she was in Bangkok. After the class, it dawned on me that she's been travelling around, so I wonder why her son doesn't need to go to school. I've been taking her classes for a year. Her son is eight or nine years old, and sometimes I see him walk past the camera behind her. Is he homeschooled while travelling to different countries? If so, that must be fun.

 

[Tarheel]

There is only one change I might make, and that's to put a comma after "teacher" (first sentence). Excellent!

 

[tedmc]

Her son is eight or nine years old, and sometimes I see him walk past the camera behind her. Is he homeschooled by her mum while travelling accompanying her to different countries?

Just to make it clearer.

 

[5jj]

. Is he homeschooled by her his mum while travelling accompanying her to different countries?