eggcracker
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I have a few sentences I had changed from original sentence. And I wonder if the transformed sentences make any difference with original sentences or become awkward.
Original sentences:
1.It grew into a large metropolis holding nearly a million people.
2.In the city Chandragupta built himself a magnificent palace set among planted grounds planted with every kind of tree and shrub.
Sentences i changed form:
1.It grew into a large metropolis which holds nearly a million people.
2.In the city Chandragupta built himself a magnificent palace which is set among planted grounds planted with every kind of tree and shrub.
Please compare original sentences and transformed sentences. And give me some explanations if there are any difference between the forms or mistake.
Original sentences:
1.It grew into a large metropolis holding nearly a million people.
2.In the city Chandragupta built himself a magnificent palace set among planted grounds planted with every kind of tree and shrub.
Sentences i changed form:
1.It grew into a large metropolis which holds nearly a million people.
2.In the city Chandragupta built himself a magnificent palace which is set among planted grounds planted with every kind of tree and shrub.
Please compare original sentences and transformed sentences. And give me some explanations if there are any difference between the forms or mistake.