Does someone get killed by someone with a weapon.

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tufguy

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Does someone get killed by someone with a weapon? Like "A person was killed by his neighbour with a shot gun in the USA over a petty issue".
 

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Your sentence is possible but it's too complicated. Start with A person was killed by his neighbo(u)r.
 

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Your sentence is possible but it's too complicated. Start with A person was killed by his neighbo(u)r.

I started with "A person was killed". Look at my sentence. What do you want me to chane?
 

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Your sentence is possible but it's too complicated. Start with A person was killed by his neighbo(u)r.

A person was killed by his neighbour with a shot gun in the USA over a petty issue.
 

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Yes, it's correct. Except "shotgun" is one word.
 
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