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foodie

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Please correct also make it short and clearer
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Ok But I really had tough time giving these exams First of all these exams are on weekends and on the last day of exams My Dad's bike tyre got punchered Thanks God I luckily managed to get a Cab and I reached 10mins before the exams,then when the exams started they electricity was going off and on in between when we were writing the paper.
 

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Please correct also make it short and clearer
How were Exams?
OK, but I really had a tough time [STRIKE]giving[/STRIKE] doing these exams. First of all, these exams are on weekends and on the last day of exams, my Dad's bike tyre got punctured. Thank God, I luckily managed to get a cab and I reached the venue 10 minutes before the exams. Then when the exams started, the electricity was going off and on [STRIKE]in between[/STRIKE] when we were writing the paper.
You need to use a period at the end of each sentence, not just at the end of the paragraph.
 
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