QuanLe
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- Jan 7, 2017
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- Vietnamese
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- Vietnam
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- Japan
Hello everyone, this is my first essay. And I am practicing writing english, any comments are welcome. Please score and correct my essay. Thank you so much.
You know, computers are very popular in the world. By using computers people can makes friends, share informations, learn something new and study together. And you can say that computer can do everything for you.
Now in looking back, about ten years ago, the first time I learn how to use computer, you know that at that time I ran into a lot of problems, because everything are being new for me, it is really hard to use it. I ask my farther for help, luckily he knows it, and he taught me the basic. I really happy with that, soon after about 2 months I got farmiliar with it, and you know from that time I can use computer whenever I want.
But now, I can say that I know everything about computer, I have been working with computers or playing game. And I realize that if you use computer for work it will help you a lot, hard work will become easier./
You know, computers are very popular in the world. By using computers people can makes friends, share informations, learn something new and study together. And you can say that computer can do everything for you.
Now in looking back, about ten years ago, the first time I learn how to use computer, you know that at that time I ran into a lot of problems, because everything are being new for me, it is really hard to use it. I ask my farther for help, luckily he knows it, and he taught me the basic. I really happy with that, soon after about 2 months I got farmiliar with it, and you know from that time I can use computer whenever I want.
But now, I can say that I know everything about computer, I have been working with computers or playing game. And I realize that if you use computer for work it will help you a lot, hard work will become easier./