Sorry for half the infomations.Write what? It's unclear what you're asking us. What do you mean by 'in a better way"?
Are you referring to the writing process itself, to improved grammar, to stylistic changes, or what?
I'm afraid neither of those sentences makes sense.
We can't help you with your project, but we can answer your questions. (Please keep your posts brief and to the point. Don't ramble!)
As for improving your writing, I have two suggestions. One, read some things written by good writers. Two, practice, practice, practice!
One more thing. Always listen to my advice.
Sure, Tarheel! (One exclamation mark suffices.)
You are absolutely right! Since this was my first post, I was quite excited and
justI mentioned only half ofthe things in the subject line.
Sure! I will follow
the samethe advice you have mentionedgave above, which I call the "PPP" formula. andThis was a good one: "One more thing. Always listen to my advice."
Thanks for explanations! I alreaady adore this forum. You do a great job.Say:
I'm on the lookout for new information .... (No 'the")
I don't think you will find anything new about that. There are some writing tips you can find online (or here on this forum). In addition to that, keep in mind what words are for. What do I mean by that? Remember that all modifiers are relative. For example, if I say somebody is a big man I mean he is big compared to other men. If I use an adjective that refers to an intrinsic property of the thing being described I have said nothing. (You never see "wet water" anywhere.) If you add a word to a sentence it should provide information that didn't exist otherwise. That word should tell me something I didn't know otherwise.
Fair enough. As you say, there is now no sign of that extra paragraph in the quote box. I can only assume it was an error on Moveholir's part (perhaps they accidentally pasted someone else's post onto the end of your quote) and that they have now removed it. There's no edit history for post #13 so it's impossible to know if/when someone edited it.