bakanaAHMET
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I would be grateful if someone could check my "problem-solution" essay.
I have a dream that people have a job.
Unemployment is a problem which spreads more than ever and which influences more and more people day by day. it happens for several reasons, such as Technologic improvement, low qualifacations people have and economic reasons. The ones who are influenced the most are the people who don't have any college degree. Even though it's a serious and improving issue, there are several solutions we can do.
To begin with, to increase the people who have college degree and many qualifications would be an affective way since the technologic improvements increases the needs for machines instead of people and employers need people who are good at machines. in order to that, we could improve facilities of the universities and develop informotion transfers among the universities in different countries by opening them into the world and by teaching the students the most common languages. Furthermore, we could help students find a job before they are graduated from their colleges.
the next solution would be to increase investment into countires. to achive that, we should support inventers more than yesterday. Also we could promote them to invest in different businesses. Moreover, we can train students to be an inventer. In this way, more shops and factories will open and more workers will be employed.
Thirdly, to look for a new and investable areas would also be one of the most affective ways to dealt with the problem. For example; space(cosmos) has undiscovered things a lot Therefore we can find a new technology or something like that any moment. Although it can be supposed to so many times to find a new one, There is nothing as bad as not doing anything.
To sum up, Even though the unemployed increase more than ever, there are several solutions which can be done. We could innovate about education and encourage inventers to invent more. In addition. We should look for new areas that can be inventable. As a result, I strongly believe ony if all these attempts are followed, unemloyment will be solved.
I have a dream that people have a job.
Unemployment is a problem which spreads more than ever and which influences more and more people day by day. it happens for several reasons, such as Technologic improvement, low qualifacations people have and economic reasons. The ones who are influenced the most are the people who don't have any college degree. Even though it's a serious and improving issue, there are several solutions we can do.
To begin with, to increase the people who have college degree and many qualifications would be an affective way since the technologic improvements increases the needs for machines instead of people and employers need people who are good at machines. in order to that, we could improve facilities of the universities and develop informotion transfers among the universities in different countries by opening them into the world and by teaching the students the most common languages. Furthermore, we could help students find a job before they are graduated from their colleges.
the next solution would be to increase investment into countires. to achive that, we should support inventers more than yesterday. Also we could promote them to invest in different businesses. Moreover, we can train students to be an inventer. In this way, more shops and factories will open and more workers will be employed.
Thirdly, to look for a new and investable areas would also be one of the most affective ways to dealt with the problem. For example; space(cosmos) has undiscovered things a lot Therefore we can find a new technology or something like that any moment. Although it can be supposed to so many times to find a new one, There is nothing as bad as not doing anything.
To sum up, Even though the unemployed increase more than ever, there are several solutions which can be done. We could innovate about education and encourage inventers to invent more. In addition. We should look for new areas that can be inventable. As a result, I strongly believe ony if all these attempts are followed, unemloyment will be solved.
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