Cunning Fox
Junior Member
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- Oct 4, 2021
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- Interested in Language
- Native Language
- Russian
- Home Country
- Russian Federation
- Current Location
- Russian Federation
A friend of mine has the following written in his profile on a dating app. I don't think it's well written though:
The original: "I like reading books, walking, chatting, swimming and traveling."
The bold part strikes me as unnatural because it sounds like he simply likes moving on foot when the intended meaning is "I like going for a stroll in the park and walking about the city".
Two questions:
1. Is my reasoning that the bold sounds unnatural correct?
2. Is my amendment any improvement to the original?
The original: "I like reading books, walking, chatting, swimming and traveling."
The bold part strikes me as unnatural because it sounds like he simply likes moving on foot when the intended meaning is "I like going for a stroll in the park and walking about the city".
Two questions:
1. Is my reasoning that the bold sounds unnatural correct?
2. Is my amendment any improvement to the original?