I saw two shops...,

[Silverobama]

I wrote the following short paragrpah, please help me with a natural version.

I saw 2 shops selling Russian snacks downtown. One which obviously offering a more variety of choices is twice bigger than the other one. They locate differently in the downtown but I guess the proprietor is one person.

Context: I go downtown almost every day because I live nearby. I saw 2 shops selling snacks and the snacks are from Russian. I didn't see these shops before. One of them is large while the other is comparative smaller. They sell almost the same things but the larger one provides more choices of snacks. Even though they're in different place (locate differently), I think the owner is one person. The person has these two shops.

 

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I wrote the following short paragraph. Please help me with a natural version.

Note the correct spelling of "paragraph". You had a comma splice.

Downtown, I saw 2 two shops selling Russian snacks. downtown. One which obviously offering a more variety of choices is was twice bigger than the size of the other one so it offered a greater variety of snacks. They locate differently are in different locations in the downtown but I guess the proprietor is one person they are owned by the same person.

See above.

Context: I go downtown almost every day because I live nearby. I saw 2 two shops selling snacks and the snacks are from Russian Russia. I didn't see hadn't noticed these shops before. One of them is large while the other is comparatively smaller. They sell almost the same things but the larger one provides more choice. choices of snacks. Even though they're in different places (locate differently), I think the owner is one they're owned by the same person.

See above.

The person has these two shops.

Redundant.