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thank you very much for help improving my writing. the essay is posted as below:
Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Normally parents are willing to buy plenty of playthings for their children. They believe that those toys play positive role in the lives of their offspring. That is ture to some extent, but it also brings some negative influence to youngsters.
The children who have lots of toys are considered as luckily ones. Amusing toys usually simulate many positives in the young boys or girls. Thas is to say, well designed toys not only are joyfull when playing, but also could help children developing their hand-eye coordination, colour recognition and intelligence. Such as Lego Blocks, children could build aparments or bridges just by some simply while colourful blocks. They are able to have building concepts and sense of achievements just according playing.
Although, too many playing staff may also lead to passive consequence. Firstly, rich parents could possibly spoil their boys or girls by giving them great quantity of toys. Childen who have less ability of controll are usually about to ask for more toys. If parents say yes for every asking, then their offspring are easily used to getting whatever they want, which is obvirously negative to children’s character. Moreover, children’s concentration could be easily interrupted if they are surrounded by lots of toys. They could not focus on one toy because theese is always a new one they want, which may result in concentration problem when growing up.
To sum up, playthings have lots of merits for children’s developing. At the same time, they also potentially influence the youngster’s lives
in negative way. Therefore, parents should carefully make choice on number and types of toys for their offspring.
Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Normally parents are willing to buy plenty of playthings for their children. They believe that those toys play positive role in the lives of their offspring. That is ture to some extent, but it also brings some negative influence to youngsters.
The children who have lots of toys are considered as luckily ones. Amusing toys usually simulate many positives in the young boys or girls. Thas is to say, well designed toys not only are joyfull when playing, but also could help children developing their hand-eye coordination, colour recognition and intelligence. Such as Lego Blocks, children could build aparments or bridges just by some simply while colourful blocks. They are able to have building concepts and sense of achievements just according playing.
Although, too many playing staff may also lead to passive consequence. Firstly, rich parents could possibly spoil their boys or girls by giving them great quantity of toys. Childen who have less ability of controll are usually about to ask for more toys. If parents say yes for every asking, then their offspring are easily used to getting whatever they want, which is obvirously negative to children’s character. Moreover, children’s concentration could be easily interrupted if they are surrounded by lots of toys. They could not focus on one toy because theese is always a new one they want, which may result in concentration problem when growing up.
To sum up, playthings have lots of merits for children’s developing. At the same time, they also potentially influence the youngster’s lives
in negative way. Therefore, parents should carefully make choice on number and types of toys for their offspring.
