samanvmofid
Junior Member
- Joined
- Mar 19, 2018
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Persian
- Home Country
- Iran
- Current Location
- Iran
Please point out my mistakes for this IELTS Task.
Task:
You are studying for a qualification and you would like sometime off work to complete it.
write a letter to your manager. in letter:
My answer:
"
Dear Mrs. Lee
I'm writing to inform you that I've been taking CAD classes for about two months after work and becoming ready for the CAD plan drawing Qualification. The test is on next Tuesday and I'm really exhausted after so many days of lack of sleep and constant working with computer. It would greatly help me that I have two days off work to rest and practice for the final test. I have already talked to Mr. Jones and he agreed to take over my duties during my absence.
After the test I will get to work one hour earlier and leave one hour later to catch up with the tower plan designing and will go to the project's site to control the building process on weekend. this test will ease my way to become an official designer and help to increase companies capacity to win more projects in the future.
yours sincerely,
Saman Mofid
"
Thank you in advance for taking your time and helping me with my English practise.
Task:
You are studying for a qualification and you would like sometime off work to complete it.
write a letter to your manager. in letter:
- ask for sometime off to complete qualification.
- suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
- say how qualification helps your job or company.
My answer:
"
Dear Mrs. Lee
I'm writing to inform you that I've been taking CAD classes for about two months after work and becoming ready for the CAD plan drawing Qualification. The test is on next Tuesday and I'm really exhausted after so many days of lack of sleep and constant working with computer. It would greatly help me that I have two days off work to rest and practice for the final test. I have already talked to Mr. Jones and he agreed to take over my duties during my absence.
After the test I will get to work one hour earlier and leave one hour later to catch up with the tower plan designing and will go to the project's site to control the building process on weekend. this test will ease my way to become an official designer and help to increase companies capacity to win more projects in the future.
yours sincerely,
Saman Mofid
"
Thank you in advance for taking your time and helping me with my English practise.
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