[General] I'll text each of them and see.....

[Silverobama]

My friends and I are going to start a new English club. Today I posted this information online but a few people reply. I think perhaps those people who once said they were interested in the club were busy. My friend asked me what people said and I said a few of them reply and I added:

I'll text each of them and see what they see.

Is the italic sentence natural?

 

[emsr2d2]

My friends and I are going to start a new English club. Today, I posted this information online but only a few people [STRIKE]reply[/STRIKE] replied. I think perhaps those people who once said they were interested in the club were busy. My friend asked me what people had said. [STRIKE]and[/STRIKE] I [STRIKE]said[/STRIKE] told him [that] a few of them [STRIKE]reply[/STRIKE] had replied and I added:

I'll text each of them and see what they [STRIKE]see[/STRIKE] say.

Is the italic sentence natural?

emsr2d2