[Grammar] I'm glad I could give you a birthday present.

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"I'm glad I could give you a birthday present. It makes me happy to remember that day and the time when you came to my birthday party and how sweet you were to me. I remember your present. It was box of chocolate sticks wrapped in a light brown paper and yellow bow."

Thanks,

 

[Tarheel]

For the second sentence try:

It makes me happy to remember the day you came to my birthday party and how sweet you were to me.

 

[Tarheel]

For the fourth sentence try:

It was a bunch of chocolate sticks in a yellow box. They were individually wrapped in light brown paper.

 

[teechar]

I'm glad I could give you a birthday present. It makes me happy to remember that day and the time when you came to my birthday party and how sweet you were to me. I remember your present. It was a box of chocolate sticks wrapped in light brown paper and tied with a yellow bow.

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