[Grammar] Kevin due to the intake of the drugs to lose weight

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kevin due to the intake of the drugs to lose weight and in addition of his fragile state, was dispersed, more as the usual in the conversation. That is why suddenly an old lady fixing her hair caught her attention and suddenly stopped talking to Susan."

Thanks.

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"Kevin, due to [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] his intake of [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] weight-loss drugs [STRIKE]to lose weight[/STRIKE] and [STRIKE]in addition of[/STRIKE] his fragile state, was dispersed (this word is not appropriate but I don't know what you mean - perhaps "distracted"?), more [STRIKE]as the[/STRIKE] than usual [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] during the conversation. That is why [STRIKE]suddenly[/STRIKE] an old lady fixing her hair caught [STRIKE]her[/STRIKE] his attention and he suddenly stopped talking to Susan."

Thanks.

See above.

 

[Nikitus]

Dear emsr2d2:

First of all, thanks for your help.

Yes, I mean distracted.

Best Regards.