Letter to My Supervisor

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thedaffodils

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ABC is a to-be American supervisor of mine. The following email has been sent to him, but I hope someone else could proofread it for me and let me know if any grammatical errors or etiquette solecisms in my writing, so that I can improve next time.

Many thanks!:)

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Hello ABC,

Thank you for your message. It was a pleasure to dine with you, and to discuss my job last Saturday. The Thai food was nice.

The info. about the agenda of *** people, and the outline of my job are very helpful. I'll review the drawings soon, and let you know if I have any questions.

As to the meetings with Mike both at the Hotel this Saturday, and at our factory on August 31, They are fine. I am flexible about the timing slots and places for the upcoming meetings. Could you please let me know Mike's last name? I hope to address him properly during our very first meeting.

I have had your contacts. And I have added your Skype ID on my Skype messager. Mine is ****

I quite appreciate the time and efforts you have taken for preparing training me, and trying to let me adapt to ****asap.

Have a great week! Thank you!

Best regards,

TD
 

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I have made a couple of small changes, but this is a personal thing. I don't think you need have any worries about the mail that you sent.
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Hello ABC,

Thank you for your message. It was a pleasure to dine with you, and to discuss my job last Saturday. The Thai food was nice. (Id say, "I enjoyed the Thai food".)

The info. about the agenda of *** people, and the outline of my job are very helpful. I'll review the drawings soon, and let you know if I have any questions.

As to the meetings with Mike both at the Hotel this Saturday, and at our factory on August 31, [STRIKE]T[/STRIKE]they are fine. I am flexible about the timing slots and places for the upcoming meetings. Could you please let me know Mike's last name? I hope to address him[STRIKE] properly[/STRIKE] correctly during our very first meeting.

I have had your contacts. And I have added your Skype ID on my Skype mess[STRIKE]a[/STRIKE]enger. Mine is ****

I [STRIKE]quite[/STRIKE] very much appreciate the time and efforts you have taken for [STRIKE]preparing[/STRIKE] training me, and [STRIKE]trying to let[/STRIKE] helping me adapt to ****asap.

Have a great week! Thank you!

Best regards,

TD
 

thedaffodils

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Hello Fivejedjon,

Thank you very much for taking time to proofread read my letter. You're very helpful.

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