make sth do sth???

[indifferent]

Is such a structure possible? Eg. ''It makes wealth become people's lives purposes". Are there any other errors? My student wrote such a sentence and I'm a little confused about its correctness...

 

[tedmc]

It makes wealth become people's lives purposes


The underlined part is not correct.

It makes wealth become people's purpose in life.
It makes the pursuit of wealth become people's purpose in life


not a teacher

 

[Clement John]

yes, agreed with tdmc

 

[Matthew Wai]

'People's life purpose' can be an alternative.

Not a teacher.

 

[Rover_KE]

Yes, I agree with tedmc.

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