, maybe with a touch of silk and...

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a. Her blouse will be linen, maybe with a touch of silk and golden buttons.
b. Her blouse will be linen, maybe with a touch of silk, and golden buttons.

c. Her blouse will be linen, maybe with a touch of silk with golden buttons.
d. Her blouse will be linen, maybe with a touch of silk, with golden buttons.

In which cases does the 'maybe' only modify 'a touch of silk', and in which cases does it modify the 'golden buttons' as well?
 
In all four examples, "maybe" is most naturally read as modifying only "a touch of silk." The golden buttons are stated as a definite feature, not an optional one. If you want "maybe" to also apply to the golden buttons, you should repeat it: "maybe with a touch of silk, maybe with golden buttons." As written, "maybe" does not modify the buttons.

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To me maybe is a conjunction, not a modifier but I'm no grammarrian.
 
a. Her blouse will be linen, maybe with a touch of silk and golden buttons.
b. Her blouse will be linen, maybe with a touch of silk, and golden buttons.

c. Her blouse will be linen, maybe with a touch of silk with golden buttons.
d. Her blouse will be linen, maybe with a touch of silk, with golden buttons.

a is fine. I consider maybe to be an adverb. it precedes with and therefore, in my opinion, modifies both a touch of silk and golden buttons.
b
does not work - it suggests that the blouse will be linen and golden buttons (maybe with a touch of silk).
c suggests that the silk has golden buttons.
d is fine.
 

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