My first diary here

[lei]

This is a diary entry. Please point out any mistakes and offer corrections.

Today would be my very first time writing a diary. Well, I meant first time sharing it with other people because my very first time writing a diary was about a guy with green eyes. (My fave colour is green.) I wrote it on Facebook, but it's only me who can read it. Anyway, let's get to the topic for today. It is about my impulsive thoughts winning over me. I've been thinking of cutting my hair really short, and then I asked my roommate to cut it for me. Now it's really short. I just smiled after it's done. I don't want my roommate to feel bad if she sees me not happy with it. It was my idea anyway, and of course I thanked her; she even used these cute scissors that kept bothering me because it sounded like it's struggling with cutting my hair, and my hair is thin.

 

[Tarheel]

Try:

This is an entry from my diary. Please point out any mistakes and offer corrections.

You might want to look at some of Maybo's threads in this section.

 

[lei]

Try:

This is an entry from my diary. Please point out any mistakes and offer corrections.

You might want to look at some of Maybo's threads in this section.

Noted.

 

[Tarheel]

Try:

I'd been thinking about getting my hair cut really short. I asked my roommate to do it for me.

 

[teechar]

I just smiled after it was cut. it's done. ... these cute scissors that kept bothering me because it they sounded like it's they were struggling with cutting my hair, and my hair is thin.

 

[Amigos4]

(My fave colour is green.)

(My favorite colour is green.) lei, we always use standard English in the forum.

 

[lei]

(My favorite colour is green.) lei, we always use standard English in the forum.

Alright, I will take note of that.

 

[emsr2d2]

This is a diary entry. Please point out any mistakes and offer corrections.

Today would be is my very first time writing a diary. Well, I meant I mean it's my first time sharing it with other people because my very first time writing a diary was about a guy with green eyes no full stop here (my fave favourite colour is green.) I wrote it on Facebook, but it's only me who only I can read it.

Anyway, let's get to the topic for today. It is about my impulsive thoughts winning over getting the better of me. I've been thinking of cutting my hair really short for a while, and then recently I asked my roommate to cut it for me. Now it's really short. I just smiled after it's it was done. I don't didn't want my roommate to feel bad if she sees me not saw that I wasn't happy with it. It was my idea anyway, and of course I thanked her; she even used these cute scissors that kept bothering me because it sounded like it's they were struggling with cutting to cut my hair no comma here and even though my hair is thin.

Note my suggested changes above.

 

[lei]

Note my suggested changes above.

This is noted. This motivates me to post another diary.

 

[Amigos4]

This is noted. This motivates me to post another diary entry.

lei, a diary has more than one entry. Therefore, we are all waiting to see what your next "diary entry" will be.

 

[lei]

lei, a diary has more than one entry. Therefore, we are all waiting to see what your next "diary entry" will be.

Okay.

 

[John Steve]

This is a diary entry. Please point out any mistakes and offer corrections.

Today would be my very first time writing a diary. Well, I meant first time sharing it with other people because my very first time writing a diary was about a guy with green eyes. (My fave colour is green.) I wrote it on Facebook, but it's only me who can read it. Anyway, let's get to the topic for today. It is about my impulsive thoughts winning over me. I've been thinking of cutting my hair really short, and then I asked my roommate to cut it for me. Now it's really short. I just smiled after it's done. I don't want my roommate to feel bad if she sees me not happy with it. It was my idea anyway, and of course I thanked her; she even used these cute scissors that kept bothering me because it sounded like it's struggling with cutting my hair, and my hair is thin.

How do you feel about your new short haircut now that some time has passed since you cut it?

 

[lei]

To be honest, I feel fresh, but since my hair is frizzy and dry, it's so messy as if I just woke up. It's not giving! so I have to comb it from time to time.

 

[John Steve]

Having long hair can be challenging I know this because I also have long hair and need to comb it many times a day to keep it tidy If I don’t take good care of it my hair gets tangled and messy Maintaining long hair takes time and effort but it's worth it to keep it looking nice

 

[lei]

Having long hair can be challenging I know this because I also have long hair and need to comb it many times a day to keep it tidy If I don’t take good care of it my hair gets tangled and messy Maintaining long hair takes time and effort but it's worth it to keep it looking nice

I feel you. Having long hair means you have give it more care and attention.

 

[John Steve]

If someone has long hair, they need to spend a lot of time and care on it. Long hair requires extra attention to keep it healthy and looking good. This means regular washing, brushing, and sometimes using special products to prevent damage or dryness. Taking care of long hair can be a bit of work, but it helps keep the hair strong and beautiful.

 

[Tarheel]

I don't know what "It's not giving" means. Please explain.

 

[lei]

I don't know what "It's not giving" means. Please explain.

This is how I understand it. If I say, "It's not giving," it means it didn't meet my expectations or I wasn't satisfied.

 

[emsr2d2]

This is how I understand it. If I say, "It's not giving," it means it didn't meet my expectations or I wasn't satisfied.

It doesn't mean that at all.

 

[lei]

It doesn't mean that at all.

What does it mean then?