Bassim
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Today I have written a few sentences using different verbs. I would like to know if I have used them correctly. Would you please correct my grammar and punctuation?
1. A morning mist crept over the river banks.
2. Peter was happy in his marriage until one day a doubt crept up on him, and he asked himself if his wife was unfaithful.
3. Anxiety crept up on her as she waited for the doctor to come up with the result of her tests.
4. She lay in her bed while the first sunbeams crept into the room through the Venetian blind.
5. The young girl' shoulders heaved with sobbing, and she burrowed her head into her mother's chest.
6. The thick fog curled along the river and moved slowly over to the nearby path. It was dimly lit, and made John frightened. His skin was soon covered in goose pimples.
7. A woman sitting beside me made vomiting noises, and I cowered away from her, afraid she was going to get sick and soil my new jacket.
8. I sat waiting for her with anticipation, but when she appeared, fat and puffing at her cigarette like an addict, my excitement waned.
9. Deciduous trees had shed their leaves, and I was strolling along the street, my old shoes making rustling noises as they hit the ground.
10. It was cold and the icy wind prickled his skin, and he tried to restrain himself from crying with pain.
1. A morning mist crept over the river banks.
2. Peter was happy in his marriage until one day a doubt crept up on him, and he asked himself if his wife was unfaithful.
3. Anxiety crept up on her as she waited for the doctor to come up with the result of her tests.
4. She lay in her bed while the first sunbeams crept into the room through the Venetian blind.
5. The young girl' shoulders heaved with sobbing, and she burrowed her head into her mother's chest.
6. The thick fog curled along the river and moved slowly over to the nearby path. It was dimly lit, and made John frightened. His skin was soon covered in goose pimples.
7. A woman sitting beside me made vomiting noises, and I cowered away from her, afraid she was going to get sick and soil my new jacket.
8. I sat waiting for her with anticipation, but when she appeared, fat and puffing at her cigarette like an addict, my excitement waned.
9. Deciduous trees had shed their leaves, and I was strolling along the street, my old shoes making rustling noises as they hit the ground.
10. It was cold and the icy wind prickled his skin, and he tried to restrain himself from crying with pain.