Bassim
VIP Member
- Joined
- Mar 1, 2008
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Bosnian
- Home Country
- Bosnia Herzegovina
- Current Location
- Sweden
Would you please correct my grammar and punctuation in the following sentences?
1. A wave of jealously swept through John as he watched his former girlfriend being kissed by another man.
2. Pain swept through my abdomen and I stopped, afraid of getting a heart attack.
3. After the latest scandal, the interior minister has been winkled out.
4. The young boy would go to martial art classes learning how to defend himself, and when he returned home, he would try it out on his brother.
5. Maria tried her hand at painting, singing and ballet, but ended up at playing the piano.
6. She found the atmosphere in the town stultifying; her thoughts circled around the only goal: to move away as soon as possible.
7. I visited an old friend and was in a bad mood when I saw how he mollycoddled his children.
8. After the quarrel, Peter heard his wife in the kitchen slamming the cupboard doors, clinking plates and cutlery, and then a glass was smashed on the floor, making him jerk and wince.
9. The concert was almost cancelled, but the organizers had managed to cobble together a band which did not disappointed the audience.
10. The man was in his thirties, but his face was pale and covered in wrinkles. Beneath the black shabby jacket, his body was shrivelled like in an old man.
1. A wave of jealously swept through John as he watched his former girlfriend being kissed by another man.
2. Pain swept through my abdomen and I stopped, afraid of getting a heart attack.
3. After the latest scandal, the interior minister has been winkled out.
4. The young boy would go to martial art classes learning how to defend himself, and when he returned home, he would try it out on his brother.
5. Maria tried her hand at painting, singing and ballet, but ended up at playing the piano.
6. She found the atmosphere in the town stultifying; her thoughts circled around the only goal: to move away as soon as possible.
7. I visited an old friend and was in a bad mood when I saw how he mollycoddled his children.
8. After the quarrel, Peter heard his wife in the kitchen slamming the cupboard doors, clinking plates and cutlery, and then a glass was smashed on the floor, making him jerk and wince.
9. The concert was almost cancelled, but the organizers had managed to cobble together a band which did not disappointed the audience.
10. The man was in his thirties, but his face was pale and covered in wrinkles. Beneath the black shabby jacket, his body was shrivelled like in an old man.
