nhungnguyen13
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I have just read an Narrative paragraph. I really like to try to make one. if you have some idea about my paragraph, pls share with me. thanks
Today is also the day that I had a painful experience 3 years ago. At that time, I had a lovely dog, LuLu. I spent all of my free time looking after him, and I loved him so much. LuLu used to play with me in the garden and often warmly welcome me at the gate when I come back. That day, the first day of my first work after graduation, I happily went home after work. As usual, he ran out the gate and picked me up. He often observes carefully before crossing the road, but that time was a contrary. He crossed the road without aware that one truck was rushing with lightning speed. I screamed, but it was too late, the truck could not break in time. I turned panic-stricken at the sight of horrific scenes, my dog was crushed by truck. He was sore in a pool of blood, breathed the weak breath. Everything collapsed and I immediately cried. Lulu was gone forever. Although many years have passed, there is still day which I'll never forget in my mind, the day that I lost my best friend.
A Horrific Experience
Today is also the day that I had a painful experience 3 years ago. At that time, I had a lovely dog, LuLu. I spent all of my free time looking after him, and I loved him so much. LuLu used to play with me in the garden and often warmly welcome me at the gate when I come back. That day, the first day of my first work after graduation, I happily went home after work. As usual, he ran out the gate and picked me up. He often observes carefully before crossing the road, but that time was a contrary. He crossed the road without aware that one truck was rushing with lightning speed. I screamed, but it was too late, the truck could not break in time. I turned panic-stricken at the sight of horrific scenes, my dog was crushed by truck. He was sore in a pool of blood, breathed the weak breath. Everything collapsed and I immediately cried. Lulu was gone forever. Although many years have passed, there is still day which I'll never forget in my mind, the day that I lost my best friend.