Yueehs
Junior Member
- Joined
- May 2, 2020
- Member Type
- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Malay
- Home Country
- Malaysia
- Current Location
- Singapore
Hi everyone,
Is this sentence correct?
Mr. Tay say that we need to hire young sales engineers and train them to become sales managers which will eventually replacing our existing sales managers when they retire in coming years.
Is there a way to shorten it?
Is this sentence correct?
Mr. Tay say that we need to hire young sales engineers and train them to become sales managers which will eventually replacing our existing sales managers when they retire in coming years.
Is there a way to shorten it?