next year

[I'm a Chubby Baby]

Perhaps, the airport is already being redeveloped. That's why I don't know how to insert 'next year' in my rewrite. Please suggest a way.

Original: The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
My paraphrase: The plans display how the Southwest airport/Airport? looks now and how it is planned to redevelop it for next year.

 

[5jj]

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look next year after redevelopment.

 

[I'm a Chubby Baby]

The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look next year after redevelopment.

Thanks, but you just copied the original. I need to paraphrase it.

 

[5jj]

I didn't. Read my version more carefully.

 

[I'm a Chubby Baby]

I didn't. Read my version more carefully.

You only change the location of 'next year', but that's not enough.

 

[emsr2d2]

The plans below show [name of airport] now and next year, after redevelopment.

 

[I'm a Chubby Baby]

The plans below show [name of airport] now and next year, after redevelopment.

Thanks, how should I write the name of the airport?

Southwest airport
the Southwest airport

Southwest Airport
the Southwest Airport

 

[5jj]

You only change the location of 'next year', but that's not enough.

Why not?

 

[emsr2d2]

Thanks. How should I write the name of the airport?

Southwest airport :cross:
the Southwest airport :cross:

Southwest Airport :tick:
the Southwest Airport :cross:

In general, the word "airport" forms part of the name of airports so capitalise it. No article is required with most proper nouns.

 

[Tdol]

These plans show how the airport will look after (the) redevelopment.

 

[tedmc]

How about:

The plans below show the redevelopment of [name of airport], before and after

 

[Rover_KE]

How about the following?

The plans below show the redevelopment of [name of airport], before and after.

:-?

 

[I'm a Chubby Baby]

The original uses "the plans show".
I changed 'show' to 'display'. But you guys all use 'show'. Can I use 'display'? If I can't, what can I use except 'show'?

 

[5jj]

Can I use 'display'?

'Show' is more natural.

 

[tedmc]

The plans show something - the new layout of the airport. They are probably displayed at the departure lounge.

 

[5jj]

They are probably displayed at the departure lounge.

... in the departures lounge

 

[I'm a Chubby Baby]

But 'display' is not wrong?

 

[5jj]

I would say that it was.

 

[emsr2d2]

Why are you paraphrasing it?

 

[I'm a Chubby Baby]

Why are you paraphrasing it?

I was told that for an IELTS writing task 1 question, the introduction paragraph should be the rewrite of the original.