[General] rewording my sentance

[iamnitab]

could u please help me reword my sentence using simple form

sentence:he has raissed questions as to the feasibility and appropriateness of doing this given the factthat he will be 90 years old in the next few months.

 

[Raymott]

Could you please help me reword my sentence using simple form?

sentence:he has raissed questions as to the feasibility and appropriateness of doing this given the factthat he will be 90 years old in the next few months.

He has raised questions as to the feasibility and appropriateness of doing this, given the fact that he will be 90 years old in the next few months.