[Essay] Smiling

[polimilan]

Hello everybody, I'd like to ask you if you can tell me if there is any mistake in these sentences:lol:: "I'm learning how to smile at everything life put and puts me through. There can be hard times, but even the harshest one will turn out to be a chance to live wholly. I'll always try to smile because life's too short not to enjoy it and also because smiling always bestows a great sense of freedom and relief."
I would like to post it as a description under a photo on Instagram haha but I'm not sure if it's 100% correct! Thank yooouu!!

 

[emsr2d2]

Hello everybody. I'd like to ask you if [STRIKE]you can tell me if[/STRIKE] there [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE] are any mistakes in these sentences. :lol:

"I'm learning how to smile at everything life [STRIKE]put and[/STRIKE] puts me through. There [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] might be hard times (no comma here) but even the harshest one will turn out to be a chance to live [STRIKE]wholly[/STRIKE] completely. I'll always try to smile because life's too short not to enjoy it and also because smiling always bestows a great sense of freedom and relief."

I would like to post it as a description under a photo on Instagram [STRIKE]haha[/STRIKE] but I'm not sure if it's 100% correct! Thank [STRIKE]yooouu[/STRIKE] you! [STRIKE]!![/STRIKE]

See my changes above, marked in red.