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[alexka]

How is the structure of the following statement? How could it be rearranged to make it more sounds?

Feasibility study for The establishment of an advanced specialty hospital
Of physical medicine and rehabilitation of persons with disabilities in lebanon

 

[5jj]

Is it the title of a study rather than a statement?

 

[alexka]

yes, it is the title of a study

 

[5jj]

Feasibility Study [STRIKE]for[/STRIKE] on the Establishment of an Advanced Specialty Hospital
of physical medicine and Rehabilitation of People with Disabilities in Lebanon

I am not sure what you mean by 'physical medicine'.

 

[alexka]

Physical Medicine what i thought would mean rehabilitation.
I guess the word "rehabilitation" would be suffficient to use in the title. Isn't that corrrect?
Thanks

 

[5jj]

In that case: Feasibility Study on the Establishment of an Advanced Specialty Hospital for the Rehabilitation of People with Disabilities in Lebanon

I think that is what you want, but wait to see if somebody with more knowledge of the field has anything to say.