[Grammar] The 50% of the product...

[englishlearner77]

Please check.

The 50% of the product we used to export to the different foreign countries, so the half of total benefits depended on it. ( how will be the business there).

Are the tenses correct?

 

[bhaisahab]

Please check.

The 50% of the product we used to export to the different foreign countries, so the half of total benefits depended on it. ( how will be the business there).

Are the tenses correct?

It doesn't make sense to me.

 

[englishlearner77]

We always used to export the 50% of our production to the foreign countries, so the half of total income depended on the business in there.

Doesn't it make any sense again?

 

[Rover_KE]

We always used to export [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] 50% of our production to [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] foreign countries, so [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] half of our total income depended on the business [STRIKE]in[/STRIKE] there.

It makes more sense now.

 

[englishlearner77]

Are the tenses correct too?

 

[Rover_KE]

I would have corrected them if they hadn't been.