Yehia 2006
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- Mar 28, 2020
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- Student or Learner
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- Arabic
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- Egypt
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- Egypt
I am not an expert. I am just student at grade 8 and I want an evaluation for my paragraph.
In our world, mobile phones are the best communication tools. We always use our phones in calling, chatting,playing games,etc.they also include a lot of information to use. These are the advantages. But they have disadvantages. They make you spend a lot of time on it. This is dangerous on your eyes and brain. They make you as a stranger from your family. They destroy your health. Finally, l hope you take my advice and stay with your family. That's better than playing on your mobile phones
In our world, mobile phones are the best communication tools. We always use our phones in calling, chatting,playing games,etc.they also include a lot of information to use. These are the advantages. But they have disadvantages. They make you spend a lot of time on it. This is dangerous on your eyes and brain. They make you as a stranger from your family. They destroy your health. Finally, l hope you take my advice and stay with your family. That's better than playing on your mobile phones