[Grammar] The real conversation from my job, please correct my words below.

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Sujing

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1. I have followed up to the (company name) today morning, they said the picture can be provided by the higher manager.
So tomorrow she will be back from taking the annual leave, the picture would be sent us tomorrow.

2. The (proper noun) presentation doesn’t have any picture and also the brochure as well.
Recently I asked to the manager, she doesn’t have any file now.

The picture below is only one that can be found from the google search.
So tomorrow morning, I will push to the higher manager and immediately inform you.

3. Please summarize the quantity of goods that were defected.(defected is mean the incomplete goods or damage)
For the correct confirmation with (proper noun) team.

4. We finish prepared the good, I have finished do return the goods in the system (for the 4th sentence I have seen the another worker use.)

for the red words, I'm not sure it correct or not.
 

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Perhaps:

I sent an email to ABC Company this morning. They said the picture can be provided by a supervisor. Tomorrow she will be back from taking her annual leave. The picture will be sent to us then.
 
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The XYZ presentation doesn't have a picture, and neither does the brochure. I talked to the manager, and she doesn't have a file right now.
 

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Please summarize the quantity of goods that were defective.
 

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Perhaps:

I sent an email to ABC Company this morning. They said the picture can be provided by a supervisor. Tomorrow she will be back from taking her annual leave. The picture will be sent to us then.

I edited this one.
 
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