Alexey86
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It was a smooth and pleasant journey to Brighton, although on arrival the icy conductor didn’t mess about waiting for someone on the platform and instead used the onboard ramps, perhaps to save time, despite the fact they are mean to use the station ramps.
After a lovely day in Brighton I headed back to the station for my return journey to Hastings at 6.45pm. It was very busy with barely any staff on hand. At the barrier, I was told to find another member of staff who could help me. Eventually the someone else approached in hi-vis. I told him I needed the next train for Hastings. Hi-vis was at least friendly. “Get on the Ashford International,” he told me. “I’ll try and grab the ramp but it’s going in the next five minutes.”
(https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2016/aug/01/southern-rail-service-disabled-passengers)
Questions:
1) Does the someone else sound natural to you?
2) Would it make sense and be natural if I changed the sentence to Eventually one of the staff in hi-vis approached me or Eventually some man/woman in hi-vis approached me?
3) Would it make sense and be natural if I changed the preceded sentence to I was told to find someone else from the staff who could help me without changing the following sentence?
4) Why member of staff? Shouldn't it be member of the staff?
After a lovely day in Brighton I headed back to the station for my return journey to Hastings at 6.45pm. It was very busy with barely any staff on hand. At the barrier, I was told to find another member of staff who could help me. Eventually the someone else approached in hi-vis. I told him I needed the next train for Hastings. Hi-vis was at least friendly. “Get on the Ashford International,” he told me. “I’ll try and grab the ramp but it’s going in the next five minutes.”
(https://www.theguardian.com/commentisfree/2016/aug/01/southern-rail-service-disabled-passengers)
Questions:
1) Does the someone else sound natural to you?
2) Would it make sense and be natural if I changed the sentence to Eventually one of the staff in hi-vis approached me or Eventually some man/woman in hi-vis approached me?
3) Would it make sense and be natural if I changed the preceded sentence to I was told to find someone else from the staff who could help me without changing the following sentence?
4) Why member of staff? Shouldn't it be member of the staff?
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