The waiter made sure of it.

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diamondcutter

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In Los Angeles, a waiter served a group of teens as they were headed to their homecoming dance. The waiter remembered his experience as a young high school student looking forward to his homecoming dance. So he made sure the teens had a pleasant experience at the restaurant. The waiter made sure of it.

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In the last sentence, the use of ‘made sure of’ seems a little strange to me. Is it used correctly?
 

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Thanks, GoesStation.

I think the waiter made sure of it means the waiter did it, which is different from the meaning of the phrase in the following sentences. Am I right?

He had stopped to catch his breath and make sure of his directions.
Always make sure of your facts before accusing anyone.
 

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The final sentence The waiter made sure of it means exactly the same thing as the preceding sentence The waiter made sure the teens had a pleasant experience at the restaurant.

I can't quite see a good reason for the repetition there, however. The final sentence seems a little out of place to me.
 

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I agree entirely. The final sentence is completely redundant. For it to be necessary, the whole piece would need to be reorganised:

In Los Angeles, a waiter served a group of teens as they were headed to their homecoming dance. [strike]The waiter remembered his experience as a young high school student looking forward to his homecoming dance. So he made sure[/strike] The teens had a pleasant experience at the restaurant. The waiter made sure of it, because he remembered being a high school student looking forward to his homecoming dance.
 
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