Silverobama
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- Joined
- Aug 8, 2010
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- Student or Learner
- Native Language
- Chinese
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- China
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- China
Hi.
Today is November 11th. It is written as 11.11 here as a special day originally to celebrate one's being single. Later, this day becomes an online shopping day because most of the things are on sale. Today, to my surprise, a supermarket also put many of its goods on sale. I see so many people in the supermarket because of today and I wrote a sentence for it "There are so many people in the supermarket because of the discount day today".
I wonder if you can help me to improve the sentence to natural.
Today is November 11th. It is written as 11.11 here as a special day originally to celebrate one's being single. Later, this day becomes an online shopping day because most of the things are on sale. Today, to my surprise, a supermarket also put many of its goods on sale. I see so many people in the supermarket because of today and I wrote a sentence for it "There are so many people in the supermarket because of the discount day today".
I wonder if you can help me to improve the sentence to natural.