[Grammar] Water damage

[PRD2021]

Upon inspection, the paper art prints were found to be slightly damged. The paper art prints have water damage. The package was found to be wet due to inappropriate packing and handling.

Is it grammatically correct and sound?

 

[emsr2d2]

Upon inspection, the paper art prints were found to be slightly damged. The paper art prints have water damage. The package was found to be wet due to inappropriate packing and handling.

Is it grammatically correct and sound?

It's far too wordy.

The [paper art] prints have become water-damaged because they were inappropriately packaged.