Winter season is about to end however it hasn't fully ended.

[tufguy]

Winter season is about to end however it hasn't fully ended. The temperature has gone up as well however I still wear something warm along with my gym t-shirt reason being after the workout our body is warm and when you go out cold breeze hits your body and makes you sick. You are more likely to fall sick at this time.


Please check my sentences.

 

[emsr2d2]

Don't put "however" in the middle of a sentence. In general, start a sentence with it. Please redo your text with that in mind. Do not edit post 1 - write a new post with those changes.

 

[Skrej]

Also, try reading your second original sentence in one breath without stopping as it's written. Once you've physically recovered from the lack of oxygen, consider where and how many times you should break it up.

 

[Tarheel]

I might say winter is almost over. As for "winter season", that's a new phrase to me.

 

[tufguy]

Don't put "however" in the middle of a sentence. In general, start a sentence with it. Please redo your text with that in mind. Do not edit post 1 - write a new post with those changes.

Winter is almost over but it hasn't fully ended. The temperature has gone up as well. I still wear something warm along with my gym t-shirt. After the workout our body is warm and when we go out cold breeze hits our body and makes us sick. We are more likely to fall sick at this time.

 

[emsr2d2]

Winter is almost over but it hasn't fully ended. The temperature has gone up as well. but I still wear something warm along with my gym t-shirt. After the a workout, our body is we are warm and but when we go outside, the cold breeze hits our body and makes us sick. We are more likely to fall sick at this time.

 

[Tarheel]

@tufguy How in the world do you come up with that stuff?

Possibly:

After a workout I'm hot and sweaty.

I only use "we" if for some reason I'm speaking for me and someone else.

I don't think I've ever seen "our body" before.