Writing organization for an essay

[mrmvp]

Hello.

This is one of the IELTS task 2 questions. I hope that you can guide me about the correct organization of the essay. The question consists of three parts

1.The question is "Incrasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems."

2.To what extent do you agree or disagree? I am going to write a balanced essay, taking about the advantages of both sides.

3.What other measures do you think might be effective?

Is this the correct organization.

I should write 5 paragraphs

1. the introduction

2. The first body paragraph is talking about how increasing the price of petrol is beneficial to solve the problems

3. paragraph 3 talking about the importance of petrol cars and how it is practical means of transportation and its advantages.

4. Answer question number 3

5. Writing the conclusion.


Source of the question.

IELTS Essay # 456 - The best way to solve traffic and pollution problems

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[jutfrank]

I am going to write a balanced essay, taking about the advantages of both sides.

Why?

 

[mrmvp]

Why?

Thank you.

To what extent do you agree or disagree? In other words, I will partially agree with the statement "Incrasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems." I will write two body paragraph, one supporting the statement and the other against it. I am not going to give my opinion because I am not asked to.


Writing 250 word essay supporting one idea can be challenging, but being neutral can help me out write more in case if I am asked to discuss both sides or give opinions.

 

[Granlit]

Your organization looks good, but I would make a small correction. After the introduction, discuss the advantages and disadvantages of raising gasoline prices in two separate paragraphs. Then answer question 3 in the next paragraph by offering alternative solutions. Finally, conclude by summarizing your balanced viewpoint. This way, your statement will be clear and well-structured.

 

[teechar]

discuss the advantages and disadvantages

But the question did not ask for those!
Also, please correct the info you provided on your profile.

 

[jutfrank]

There are two questions here, not three. That should give you some idea of how to organise the piece. Answer them both directly, clearly, and fully.