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Analysis of official IELTS formal letter tasks

Analysis of official IELTS formal letter tasks

Descriptions of the situations, functional language, number of points to cover, etc in the twenty six official IELTS GT Writing letter tasks that need formal language.

This is a detailed analysis of all 26 clearly formal IELTS GT Writing Task 1 tasks published in official Cambridge IELTS exam practice books. It starts with a summary of how the tasks are similar and different to each other, then there is a table going through each task in detail. This is designed to help make exam practice reflect the real test, prioritise what to study, and find particular kinds of tasks. Tasks where different levels of formality are possible will be dealt with in other articles. There are over 500 pages of photocopiable IELTS General and IELTS Academic Writing materials here: https://www.usingenglish.com/e-books/ielts-writing/ and more on formal letters more generally here: https://www.usingenglish.com/resources/letter-writing.php

Summary of official IELTS General Writing formal letter tasks

Kinds of official IELTS formal letter and who to

  • No task since 1995 has clearly been a reply to a formal letter (so the common real-life phrase “Thank you for your letter” has never been necessary, and has very rarely been possible)
  • The most common kinds of people and organisations that you need to write formal letters to are: a future or new employer (5 out of 26 tasks), newspaper or magazine (4 tasks), shop (4 tasks), local council/ local government (2 tasks), educational institution (2 tasks), and hotel (2 tasks).
  • The most common kinds of formal letter/ situations to write formal letters in are: complain about bad service etc (6 out of 26 tasks), job applications (5 tasks), getting back lost property (2 tasks), giving feedback on something you were asked to give your opinion on (2 tasks), and giving opinions/ opposing (2 tasks, most recently in 2021). Most kinds of letters (selling something, apologising, cancelling, etc) only occur once.

 

Opening official IELTS formal letters

  • In 20 out of the 26 tasks which clearly need formal letters, you are told to start the letter with “Dear Sir or Madam,” (or “Dear Sir,” once, in a very old task)
  • There have recently been two formal letter tasks with the name given as title plus family name (“Dear Mr/ Ms…”)
  • Since 2007, if the task asks you to start with “Dear…” (not “Dear Mr/ Ms…”), a formal letter has not been suitable

 

Functions in the body of official IELTS formal letters

Many functions have appeared once only, so this list just includes functions that have been needed more than once.

  • In more than half of clearly formal letters (15 out of 26 tasks), the writer is told to describe and/ or explain something
  • Similarly, the task mentions giving reasons or explaining consequences in 13 out of the 26 examples (and giving reasons could be used in many other tasks)
  • In 10 tasks, you are asked to complain or give negative feedback
  • In 7 tasks, the task requires the writer to make a suggestion or suggestions
  • 6 tasks need a request or demand
  • 5 tasks involve giving opinions, such as disagreeing or describing advantages
  • 3 tasks involve positive feedback, compliments and/ or thanks
  • 3 tasks include making arrangements
  • 2 tasks include apologies or giving bad news
  • 2 tasks involve enquiries/ asking for information
  • 2 tasks mean you have to introduce yourself (and that might be possible in a few more examples, though in English we usually avoid self-introductions in letters when possible)

 

Things to cover in each bullet point of official IELTS formal letter tasks

  • 11 out of 26 tasks have two points or a plural in one of the three bullet points (most recently in 2022), and several more probably need more than one point despite not specifically mentioning it. This means that the writer often has to cover more than three points (though probably still in three body paragraphs).

 

  • Most recent tasks are (clearly or probably) responses to something such as an ad, and so could start with mention of what the writer is responding to (“I am writing with regards to your advertisement…”, etc)
  • Since 2020 (and in three out of four tests in 2019), all the tasks could (and usually should) be written in clearly formal style or clearly informal/ casual/ friendly style, with no need for medium-formality letters. This means that the candidate can quickly decide on the right level of formality, and can impress the examiner by using either formal written language or idiomatic language
  • Complaints are not as common as they used to be (though they have not disappeared)
  • As mentioned above, there haven’t been examples of “Dear…” for formal letters recently
  • As mentioned above, there have been two examples of “Dear Mr/ Ms….” given in formal letter tasks recently

There has been no major change in the wide variety of kinds of letter, types of people you are writing to, and sorts of function in the body in the different tasks in each year.

 

Oddities/ Surprises

  • There have been examples where the candidate is told to write “Dear Sir or Madam” even though they should know or could easily find out the person’s name (most recently in 2016)
  • In some older (but not so old) official practice test books, none of the tasks are responses to other communication

See the parts with a star (*) in the table below for specific examples of oddities.

 

Conclusions

The clearest conclusion is that candidates need to study language and tactics specific to IELTS General. This is because the tasks and resulting letters are very different from typical formal emails and letters in real life, including the most common opening greetings, opening lines, functions in the body, kinds of emails, etc, being very different from most people’s usual written communications in business or with businesses.

 

Year by year detailed analysis of official Cambridge IELTS formal letter tasks

The columns below show the test and the year it was published, if this letter is clearly a reply to another letter etc or not, who you must write to, the general sort of letter that is needed, how you are told to start it, what functional language phrases are needed in the body of the letter, and if more than three points need to be covered in the body. A star in brackets (*) means a surprising point like things which are different in all the other tests and things that you are told to do but don’t really match the situation described.

Year Book/ test

Reply?

Who to

Situation/ Kind of letter

Open

Forma-lity

Functions needed

Plurals or two points in one bullet?

2022 17/ 2

probably, but could be after a call, etc

parents of friend

negative response to invitation

Dear Mr and Mrs Collins,(*)

formal

negative response, reason, plans

details of a plan to meet Chris

2022 17/ 3

probably not, but maybe after an email informing you of place on the course

college admin staff

cancelling a course

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

bad news, reason, enquiry

no

2022 17/4

not exactly, but after they send clothes

clothing company/ clothes retailer

complain about a purchase

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

complain, reason(s)

no

2021

16/ 1

no, but answer to ad

English speaker in your town

apply for part time job

Dear Mrs Barrett,

formal

suggest/ offer, reason(s), arrange

no, but probably offer/ suggest more than one thing

2021

16/ 2

no, but response to article

national news- paper

disagree with an article

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

opinion/ agree, disagree/ explain, offer/ invite

points you agree with, ways your town is different

2021

16/ 3

no, but response to request in a mag

mag-azine editor

explain a book which influenced you most

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

describe/ explain, opinion

no

2020

15/ 2

no, but reply to ad

museum director

apply for volunteer position

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

reason(s), positive points, arrange/ availability

skills and qualities, details

2020

15/ 4

no, but reply to an ad

couple looking for home tutor

apply to be home teacher

Dear…,

formal

reasons

reasons

2019

14/ 1

no, but response to an ad

family with six year old

apply for job

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

reason(s), positive points

no, but probably need reasons why you are suitable

2019

14/ 2

no, but response to an article

editor of a mag- azine you read

correct info about your town

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

negative feedback/ complain, reason(s), suggest/ request/ demand

no, but probably more than one mistake to correct

2019

14/ 3

probably, but could be response to chat etc

director of cookery school you studied at

give feedback they asked for

Dear Sir or Madam,(*)

formal

positive feedback/ compliment/ thanks, explain, suggest

no, but probably more than one thing you enjoyed/ cooking since

2018

13/ 2

no

hotel

feedback

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

positive feedback, negative feedback, suggest

no

2018

13/ 3

no

local council

about rubbish

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

complain/ negative feedback, consequences, suggest

no

2017

12/ 1

no

manuf- acturer or shop

complain about equipment you use in your job

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

complain, request/ demand

no

2017

12/ 3

no, but response to call for feedback

large firm in your area

advice on spending money on something good

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

suggest, contrast, addition

benefits, benefits

2016

11/ 2

no

manager of hotel where meeting happened

reclaim lost property

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

explain/ describe, request

no

2016

11/ 3

no

local council

oppose plan to close a leisure centre

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

give info/ describe/ explain, consequences

friends and family, effects

2016

11/ 4

no

boss

get permission to take external training

Dear Sir or Madam,

(*)

formal

describe/ explain

no

2015

10/ B

no

restaurant

give positive feedback/ praise/ compliment

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

describe/ explain, reason(s), positive feedback/ compliment/ thanks

no

2011

8/ B

no, but after call

kitchen shop

complain about equipment

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

describe, complain, request/ demand

no

2007

6/ A

no

landlord

complain

Dear…,

formal

introduce, explain, request/ demand

no

2005

4/ A

no

super- market

complain about accident there

Dear Sir or Madam,

formal

introduce, explain/ complain, suggest

details

2002

3/ A

no

new employer

delay starting that new job

Dear…,

formal

explain/ reason(s), describe, arrange, apology

problems

2002

3/ B

no

news- paper

opinion on plan to expand the local airport

Dear Sir/ Madam,

formal

explain, describe/ complain, reasons

reasons

2000

2 (only one)

no

airline

complain about still missing luggage

Dear…,

formal

explain/ describe, enquire, complain

no bullet points(*)

1995

1 (only one)

yes

bank

complain about their mistake

Dear Sir, (*)

formal

explain, complain, request/ demand

no bullet points(*)

                 

 

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