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Frenk969
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Hello everybody! Firs of all, I'd like to say I'm new on this website. That said, I'd like somebody to read my article and give me some feedback. I have to specify that I've been using 'Write and Improve', an online website based on Cambridge Assessments where there're lots of piece of writings to write. I've written some, and my level, according to their evaluation, should be C1/C2. Now, I clearly don't know how trustful it is, but I feel quit confident. Anyway, below I'm going to paste my latest piece of writing.
Mobile Phones’ Addicted
Have mobile phones changed our lives? Of course they have, but how? The number of kids having a mobile phone is increasingly rising. Once, they were mainly used to contact other people; today, instead, we tend to use it for utterly different bunch of things. Some people get overwhelmed by telephone and cannot stop using it - this is what is commonly known as addiction. Would you like to have further information on this subject to know if you are one of those addicted and what you're risking? Read below and find it out.
Certainly, its utility is undeniable: provided one has the latest model, there’re plenty of things one can use it for: from basic stuff like surfing on the Net to advanced things. As if this wasn’t enough, what once was mainly used to communicate, now has no limits, since it gets often upgraded unlocking and providing users with brand-new applications, and generally speaking more possibilities.
Are there only advantages? The answer is no, there’re disadvantages as well: what do they consist of? It depends on how we use it: used properly, there’s no problem. But, relying completely on it can result in getting obsessed, which basically means spending our precious time online, maybe doing useless things. What is allarming is the relationship between phone abuse and anxiety. Last but not least, when kept close to the body for a long time, phones raise the risk of skin cancer -information not spread by phones’ companies, since seales would decrease. Last but not least, when kept close to the body for a long time, phones raise the risk of skin cancer -information not spread by phones’ companies, since seales would decrease.
Generally speaking, it’s normal nowadays to use a mobile. Wouldn’t we be surprised otherwise? Unless you overuse it, there’s not a real threat, as far as we know. Anyway, perhaps the truth lies in the middle ground: a certain level of caution would be vital, since better safe than sorry!
Mobile Phones’ Addicted
Have mobile phones changed our lives? Of course they have, but how? The number of kids having a mobile phone is increasingly rising. Once, they were mainly used to contact other people; today, instead, we tend to use it for utterly different bunch of things. Some people get overwhelmed by telephone and cannot stop using it - this is what is commonly known as addiction. Would you like to have further information on this subject to know if you are one of those addicted and what you're risking? Read below and find it out.
Certainly, its utility is undeniable: provided one has the latest model, there’re plenty of things one can use it for: from basic stuff like surfing on the Net to advanced things. As if this wasn’t enough, what once was mainly used to communicate, now has no limits, since it gets often upgraded unlocking and providing users with brand-new applications, and generally speaking more possibilities.
Are there only advantages? The answer is no, there’re disadvantages as well: what do they consist of? It depends on how we use it: used properly, there’s no problem. But, relying completely on it can result in getting obsessed, which basically means spending our precious time online, maybe doing useless things. What is allarming is the relationship between phone abuse and anxiety. Last but not least, when kept close to the body for a long time, phones raise the risk of skin cancer -information not spread by phones’ companies, since seales would decrease. Last but not least, when kept close to the body for a long time, phones raise the risk of skin cancer -information not spread by phones’ companies, since seales would decrease.
Generally speaking, it’s normal nowadays to use a mobile. Wouldn’t we be surprised otherwise? Unless you overuse it, there’s not a real threat, as far as we know. Anyway, perhaps the truth lies in the middle ground: a certain level of caution would be vital, since better safe than sorry!
