[Grammar] At Mark's house, John, Steven and Patrick were reunited

Nikitus

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Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"At Mark's house, Steven, Mark and Rose were reunited in a dark room. Only a few murmurs were heard between Mark and Steven, while Rose tried to understand why they had called her for a project that seemed to be finished. The multimedia projector twas turned on and it began to show images that would answer the questions of Rose."


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Nikitus

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Dear teechar:

Sorry I didn't noticed that there was more questions.

I answered them.

Thanks.
 

teechar

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Dear teechar:

Sorry, I didn't notice that there [STRIKE]was[/STRIKE] were more questions.

I've (now) answered them.

Thanks.

At Mark's house, Steven, Mark and Rose were reunited in a dark room. Only a few murmurs were heard [STRIKE]between[/STRIKE] from Mark and Steven, while Rose tried to understand why they had called her for a project that seemed to be finished. The multimedia projector was turned on and it began to show images that would answer [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Rose's questions. [STRIKE]of Rose.[/STRIKE]
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