[Grammar] At Mark's house, John, Steven and Patrick were reunited

[Nikitus]

Hello.

Are the following sentences grammatically correct?

"At Mark's house, Steven, Mark and Rose were reunited in a dark room. Only a few murmurs were heard between Mark and Steven, while Rose tried to understand why they had called her for a project that seemed to be finished. The multimedia projector twas turned on and it began to show images that would answer the questions of Rose."


Thanks.

 

[teechar]

How about responding to the question you were asked in your other thread?

https://www.usingenglish.com/forum/...-the-theater-with-hamburgers-and-french-fries

 

[Nikitus]

Dear teechar:

Sorry I didn't noticed that there was more questions.

I answered them.

Thanks.

 

[teechar]

Dear teechar:

Sorry, I didn't notice that there [STRIKE]was[/STRIKE] were more questions.

I've (now) answered them.

Thanks.

At Mark's house, Steven, Mark and Rose were reunited in a dark room. Only a few murmurs were heard [STRIKE]between[/STRIKE] from Mark and Steven, while Rose tried to understand why they had called her for a project that seemed to be finished. The multimedia projector was turned on and it began to show images that would answer [STRIKE]the[/STRIKE] Rose's questions. [STRIKE]of Rose.[/STRIKE]

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