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[HifaMo]

Please, is the following sentence correct?

The pretty young girl in front of you at whom everybody is looking is the writer's daughter.

Thanks.

 

[billmcd]

Please, is the following sentence correct?

The pretty young girl in front of you at whom everybody is looking [STRIKE] at [/STRIKE] is the writer's daughter.

Thanks.

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[probus]

With at corrected, your sentence is grammatically correct. But it does not sound very natural. Whom is little used nowadays. More natural would be:

The pretty young girl in front of you who everybody is looking at is the writer's daughter.